In this project we tried to create a story by using multiple photos in succession. I tried to create a coherent story while balancing taking to many photos while not leaving the viewer confused with the story. I felt that I balanced these to ideas well.
John, your photos are great!! I really like all of your photos. The stories are interesting, funny, and I find it easy to follow. My favorite is the first one. Each photo is unique with it's own story line. Good job and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGood work John! I like all of your stories. The only thing I would say is that it would possibly be easier to follow them if they were in smaller sequences. Other than that i like the ideas you created. Nice work.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your sets! Each of them portray a great story and you captured the assignment well. Great Work!
your stories are funny and enjoyable. they are really easy to understand. it would be helpful if you had shorter stories, or more ideas. good job!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work, John! My favorite photo is the first one, I like how the collage is laid out, looks really good! Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice work, Johnnnny! Your story sets are really funny. I like the second one a lot and what you did with the story sets as you obviously understood the assignment.
ReplyDeleteyour photos are really good. I like your stories. They are also funny even though they seem to try to be dramatic. Good work!
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